BloodpigsxXx Says:
May 19, 2008 - I really like it. It's almost OT3P-esque. The meter was off when you spoke it, but that's prolly just cause you were nervous. Fantastic job!
nikisfly Says:
May 22, 2008 - thank you! yeah, i had to start the camera over SO many times, i was really nervous.
JonnyLove22 Says:
May 24, 2008 - k..im not gonna lie..but when i saw your other vid..about car and trucks..i thought you were kinda dizty lol sorry..but damn!!! this was deep...good job!! =D i likededed it a lot...
samdraper107 Says:
May 27, 2008 - This is not negitivity. I Hope. But you seem to be hiding behind your large and akwardly placed words. Simplicity is key with poetry.9at least most poetry) You want the reader (or listener) to know exactly what you are feeling. And when you use such large, inept language it makes it tough for the reader to understand the implacation you are trying to portray. Thus causing some of the more arrogant stature to take your measage wrongly. Nevertheless, your point was clear and easy to identify with
fattony8803 Says:
Jun 5, 2008 - pretty good. very deep. i think with the right music it could be made into lyricsw for a song
UTJRC1990 Says:
Jun 14, 2008 - Very well spoken, well crafted all around. Nice poem :))
PowerPrem Says:
Jun 15, 2008 - what depression?
BK9307 Says:
Jul 18, 2008 - nice i really liked it
nikisfly Says:
May 18, 2008 - commennnnt