MyDionysus Says:
Aug 7, 2008 - Roy,,, Boudica just commented on this, but it is not here? I said we need more Roys...
beautiful0loser Says:
Aug 7, 2008 - Ha! This is excellent... so sooner or later we ALL end up in Florida?? eh?? very amusing...
DoloresD Says:
Aug 7, 2008 - excellent!
Proshka Says:
Aug 7, 2008 - Bravo! 5/5
Bentleymon Says:
Aug 7, 2008 - Thanks, Angela. I wish I had back-up "voices": as in your latest effort... Ah, dreaming! (I always promised myself that if I ever got a band I'd name it Roy & the Fucking Christs: Everyone could just go ahead and be offended at the outset and have that out of the way!)
ezseeker Says:
Aug 7, 2008 - Great poem! That guy with the British accent sounds like the guy I called about my air conditioner. Easy
Bentleymon Says:
Aug 7, 2008 - They're brothers, Easy. Roy
Bentleymon Says:
Aug 7, 2008 - If you eat your vegetables and don't argue with your bosses, say yessir and no sir, and--and this is key to getting to live in Florida--you have to be ready willing and able to pay twice for every commodity and service you consume and consider yourself lucky because, well, there's the sunshine! Giddyup. Roy
Bentleymon Says:
Aug 7, 2008 - Thank you for that, Morgan. And thank you always for your exuberance! You are an inspiration. Roy
RichiBrusa Says:
Aug 8, 2008 - :-) 5\5
Bentleymon Says:
Aug 8, 2008 - Thanks so much, and for taking time with this. Roy
InmediasMe Says:
Aug 8, 2008 - Very good. Love how you use the move with this real-life bat situation. And it is so rich and detailed. I feel like I just heard a full story.
Bentleymon Says:
Aug 8, 2008 - Thank you, Lo. I thank you and the bats thank you...
Bentleymon Says:
Aug 8, 2008 - Thank you, D. I love hearing what you think about the work; you seem to give it a chance to reach out and touch you, on some level. Many thanks! Roy
tjkoz22 Says:
Aug 8, 2008 - Oh, I love this one, brother. It has a little bit of everything, but the Bentley tongue-in-cheek humor really stands out nicely here, and the laugh felt so good. But as Morgan points out, you never let us get by with just a laugh: thinking is a prerequisite to the punchline.
Bentleymon Says:
Aug 8, 2008 - Tom, thanks--you've made my day! I'm so glad this worked for you; it's a quirky piece. Lots of potential for things to go awry... Roy
AlIsJoNiSh Says:
Aug 9, 2008 - It`s really very good!And interesting for me and i think for other people too!=)
DoloresD Says:
Aug 11, 2008 - I try to soak in the atmosphere you creat, you're amazing at creating a mood. I admit sometimes I get lost a little because some of your writing is beyond me, but the mood is always the one thing I get without exception.
Bentleymon Says:
Aug 11, 2008 - It's funny you say that, D: a review of my last book said that mood was of more importance in my poems than in most they'd read. Hey, I just write 'em! Thanks so much. Roy
rpVerlaine Says:
Aug 13, 2008 - good job 5 stars the best rp
Bentleymon Says:
Aug 13, 2008 - Thank you very much for checking this out. Much appreciate it! Roy
DEEPBLUEDTD Says:
Aug 20, 2008 - good stuff...i love your interestng view of things...
acidityfalls Says:
Aug 7, 2008 - R.I.P. Heath. Your making people think about things, and that is good. We need more Roys.